I have chosen to work by myself because I don't like working in groups with people because they either muck around, don't do anything to help with the task or distract me when i'm trying to work on the task that has been set.
The provocation videos we had to watch to get to write things down to make a perfect utopia society and the things I wrote down were education, relationships, religion, the architecture, national culture, health, the government, rules of the perfect utopia society, economy for people to get money, demographics for different types of people to live there, employment, the location for the perfect utopia society, food, water, air, landscape and sustainability.
My ideas for the perfect utopia society are schools for kids to go to for them to learn, read and write, hospitals for doctors and nurses to help people that are very sick because of their health, jobs for adults to work for to get money for their families, multiple shops with fruit, meat, vegetables and drinks, for the perfect utopia society there would be palm trees, flowers and all sorts of garden things and the main thing is the location for the perfect utopia society would be near Hawaii.
The name I have chosen for the perfect utopia society is Oceana. I have chosen this name because it has a clear meaning linked with the ocean because my perfect utopia society in on an island near the ocean.
My perfect utopia society would be located on an island near Hawaii. This location is important because my perfect utopia society is summer time society with all the beaches, spas and bars for the adults and summer sports.
The name I have chosen for the perfect utopia society is Oceana. I have chosen this name because it has a clear meaning linked with the ocean because my perfect utopia society in on an island near the ocean.
My perfect utopia society would be located on an island near Hawaii. This location is important because my perfect utopia society is summer time society with all the beaches, spas and bars for the adults and summer sports.
FEEDBACK:
ReplyDelete1. We like how you have schools where children can read and write.
2. You don't have any universities.
3. Could add some fire stations and police stations incase fires brake out and crimes occur.
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ReplyDeleteWe like the layout of your blog and the detail of your post but there needs to be more posts.
ReplyDeleteFeedback:
ReplyDelete- Overall your post was quite lovely, the ideas that you had and the placement of your island but we were hoping for more posts so we could give better feedback.
- We can't really say any concerns or ask any questions as there isn't much to go off of due to the lack of posts.
- We would love for more posts so better feedback could be given.
~ Katie, Sean and Tahlia.
overall i like the layout of your blog, and your post was perfect but i would love to see more post also a map of your society. i cant really say anything else about your society, but i like your ideas that you had.
ReplyDeleteFeedback:
ReplyDelete- The layout of your blog was thought out well, everything relative to a topic was together which made it easier to read.
- I don't have any concerns or questions to ask.
- I think a clearer indication of the size of your island and the amount of people living on your island needs to be stated.
your blog was very thought out and planned, how many people will your island hold, we would like to see more posts so we can give more feedback on your blog - Patrick, Kody, Daemon
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